ok time for hobo's time of criticise.
looks trippy, you need to work on placeing your name or name of site on the wallpaper, its in a vary bad spot, u need to keep the text in a good location so ppl can ezly see it
make sure the font matchs the wallpaper ITS VARY IMPORTANT, u dont want a walpaper that has a firetheme and the font look like ice.. ok?
it looksl ike u used the plastic rap or whatever its called filter from ps..
Hobo's over all rating is, 3.7 vary nice for your first wallpaper man
try adding some things to it to make it stand out from all the other wallpapers ppl make
