Testing Sig

icer · 10-12-2005, 06:56 AM

I am noob at making sigs, this Is one of my first works.
I am testing it, so feel free to post any sujestions on imroving this sig and what you think about it.

**Sean** · 10-12-2005, 07:07 AM

nice dude, the line ruins the eyes but.

**Kate** · 10-12-2005, 09:29 AM

I agree with Sean about the line though - maybe if it was reduced in width a little and moved to the bottom it would look cool? Other than that looks hot - can't wait to see some more

**Fragalot** · 10-13-2005, 01:48 AM

ye.... the line shouldn't cover the eyes...
else it's kinda cool

~Achilles~ · 10-13-2005, 04:01 PM

Just delete the 2 lines going through the eyes

SheraXIX · 10-14-2005, 04:36 PM

I dunno, I kinda like it. the lines coordinate your signature and put deapth to the background image. Course I'm no expert at this, but I've done a few sketches, graphics (( regularly a long time ago)). I do believe a creator must step back and see what he is trying to say with the art.

Yours tells me that your text is more important than the background, which it should be. The overlay places the eyes at a deapth which neither enhances that one thing, nor detracts from your statement. If you were to remove the layer, or whatever it is you placed there to create the impression of a backdrop, I would feel the eyes were of more importance to the creator than the text.

Maybe you could accomplish the same thing by enhancing the text a bit more, and shadowing the backdrop? Got me, it depends on what you're trying to do. This is but my opinion.

OMG !! I made it to Rookie.

No more chooblet.

**Sean** · 10-14-2005, 11:01 PM

Yep Rookie is after 20 posts